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Llola Lane's Story Telling Thread... Looking for Writers/Poets!!! Join me if you wish :)

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  • TJohnTJohn Posts: 11,129
    edited December 1969

    bigh said:
    there once was a man that wasn't there
    he wasn't there again today
    wish he would go away

    I look around the room but there's nothing there
    he looks at me but sees me not

    I hear a rap rap at the window I look
    but hes not there

    I spin a round nothing there
    maybe hes at my back

    I look down the hall
    nothing to see
    is he standing there looking at me

    the door swing open o so slowly
    I look there nothing to see
    Maybe he doesn't like me

    no one hears me
    am I there

    so I set all alone


    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/William_Hughes_Mearns
  • TJohnTJohn Posts: 11,129
    edited December 1969

    This is something I wrote and posted to the Complaint Thread a while back, but I thought might be appropriate here.
    This is symptomatic of my own particular humor/insanity. :)

    Uncle Grandpa Tells A Bedtime Story

    "Gather around now, children, and Uncle Grandpa will tell you all a bedtime story." They sat on the floor at Uncle Grandpa's feet.
    "Does it have bears in it?" asked Julie.
    "Nope, no bears," he replied.
    "Does it have a dragon?" asked Billy.
    "No, no dragons either," answered Uncle Grandpa, getting a little bit testy now.
    "How about a princess?" asked Maggie.
    "No, no bears, dragons or stinkin' princesses!" yelled Uncle Grandpa. "And if you don't shut up and listen, I'll tell the story about what happened to the boy who asked too many questions again!"
    "Please don't!" begged little Elmer, "The last time you told that one I had nightmares."
    "Alright then, listen up you little rugrats," and he began to tell the story.

    The Gruggle Monk And The Moon

    Once upon a time there was a Gruggle Monk named Bob (of course, all Gruggle Monks are named Bob). Every night before he went to bed, Bob would say "Hello" and "Goodnight" to the Moon.
    One night much to Bob's surprise the Moon came down from the sky to see him.
    "Hello, Bob," said the Moon. Bob was so shocked at first he couldn't speak. Finally he found his voice.
    "Hello, Moon," said Bob. It took him a little while, but he finally asked, "What's it like to be the Moon?"
    "Not bad," replied the Moon, "although it can get a bit cold and lonely up there. What's it like to be a Gruggle Monk?"
    "It's okay, I guess," said Bob, "I really never thought about it much."
    The Moon and Bob talked for a long time, then they told each other "Goodnight" and the Moon went back up into the sky.
    The End

    "Well, children, what did you think of the story?" asked Uncle Grandpa. Tommy thought hard about it for a long time.
    "It kinda sucked," he finally said.
    "Hmmmm. Did it?" Uncle Grandpa asked, then he chuckled. "Yeah, I guess it did. Now off to bed you all go."
    The Other End

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  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    LOL.. that's a WONDERFUL story tjohn...It made me smile... I hope your complaint was heard ;) Thank you sooo much for sharing!
    Happy rendering!

  • bighbigh Posts: 8,147
    edited December 1969

    llolalane said:
    bigh said:
    there once was a man that wasn't there
    he wasn't there again today
    wish he would go away

    I look around the room but there's nothing there
    he looks at me but sees me not

    I hear a rap rap at the window I look
    but hes not there

    I spin a round nothing there
    maybe hes at my back

    I look down the hall
    nothing to see
    is he standing there looking at me

    the door swing open o so slowly
    I look there nothing to see
    Maybe he doesn't like me

    no one hears me
    am I there

    so I set all alone

    Thank you for the lovely poem Bigh... I SEE you ;)... don't forget to add a render please :)

    done !

  • JaderailJaderail Posts: 0
    edited January 2014

    I added a Old render to that Old thing. It goes well with the mood it was meant to invoke. If I ever find my Copy of my Published Poem I'll add it and a render for it. It's well over 20 years old but the verse still reads fine today.

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  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    bigh said:
    there once was a man that wasn't there
    he wasn't there again today
    wish he would go away

    I look around the room but there's nothing there
    he looks at me but sees me not

    I hear a rap rap at the window I look
    but hes not there

    I spin a round nothing there
    maybe hes at my back

    I look down the hall
    nothing to see
    is he standing there looking at me

    the door swing open o so slowly
    I look there nothing to see
    Maybe he doesn't like me

    no one hears me
    am I there

    so I set all alone


    oooo.... wonderful render to go with the poem... rather spooky and mystic.. it sent shivers down my spine. THANK YOU for sharing :)
    Happy rendering!!!

  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    Jaderail said:
    Here is a little ditty I came up with... needs a render... Sorry for the Down but I was down at the time.

    Silence is Golden, oh so deadly bright.
    When it is all you listen too, each and every night.

    That render goes great with the ditty... I FEEL the silence. Thank you for sharing Jaderail :)
    Happy rendering!

  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    Jaderail said:
    I added a Old render to that Old thing. It goes well with the mood it was meant to invoke. If I ever find my Copy of my Published Poem I'll add it and a render for it. It's well over 20 years old but the verse still reads fine today.

    Wonderful Jaderail... I hope you find your poem... after 20 years.. it's time to be dusted off and enjoyed for all to read... I'll keep the fingers crossed that you find it...;)

  • bighbigh Posts: 8,147
    edited December 1969

    I know she out there waiting for me

    I set here looking out over the water on a lovely night

    we spent many a night together on this very spot

    she had eyes the color of water on a blue sky day and fine red hair that flowed down her back

    I look at my watch and see it's 10 to 12

    I take a pull from the bottle waiting for the bell

    I spinning the chamber and clock it

    I hear the church bell toll 12

    Click

    I start the car thinking

    I use a anvil and chain
    I know she out there waiting for me

    see you next year

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  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    bigh said:
    I know she out there waiting for me

    I set here looking out over the water on a lovely night

    we spent many a night together on this very spot

    she had eyes the color of water on a blue sky day and fine red hair that flowed down her back

    I look at my watch and see it's 10 to 12

    I take a pull from the bottle waiting for the bell

    I spinning the chamber and clock it

    I hear the church bell toll 12

    Click

    I start the car thinking

    I use a anvil and chain
    I know she out there waiting for me

    see you next year

    Oh my Bigh... such a lonely render... Life is soooo worth living... I can't imagine being so lonely. Thank you for sharing :) Big hugzzzzzz :)
    Happy rendering!

  • WendyLuvsCatzWendyLuvsCatz Posts: 38,270
    edited December 1969

    I think he is going to find his lost love and send her to the fishes :snake:

  • WendyLuvsCatzWendyLuvsCatz Posts: 38,270
    edited December 1969

    geeze these yungums wid dere iPads,
    iPhones
    iTea
    iDears
    whaddcha know
    we had no iAnything in my day we didn't
    we were raised proper
    had to think for ourselves we did
    uhm......?
    where waz I again
    ......................these yungums

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  • bighbigh Posts: 8,147
    edited December 1969

    wendy♥catz said:
    geeze these yungums wid dere iPads,
    iPhones
    iTea
    iDears
    whaddcha know
    we had no iAnything in my day we didn't
    we were raised proper
    had to think for ourselves we did
    uhm......?
    where waz I again
    ......................these yungums

    love it :-)
    to true

  • WendyLuvsCatzWendyLuvsCatz Posts: 38,270
    edited December 1969

    My gif too big to add

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  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    WOW Wendy.. didn't know we could add animated renders to threads... wonderful... but his finger makes me hurt (ouchie)... lol... Thanks for sharing.
    Happy rendering!

  • WendyLuvsCatzWendyLuvsCatz Posts: 38,270
    edited December 1969

    Arthritis

  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    wendy♥catz said:
    Arthritis

    lol.. ahh yes... I've heard about that. (crosses fingers) :)

  • TJohnTJohn Posts: 11,129
    edited December 1969

    wendy♥catz said:
    Arthritis

    Nothing Handy Dandy couldn't fix. :)
    http://www.daz3d.com/handy-dandy
  • WendyLuvsCatzWendyLuvsCatz Posts: 38,270
    edited December 1969

    yes very sloppy of me
    (handy product too by looks)
    I usually remove animation from hands and feet using M4 & V4 animations but slacked off

  • TJohnTJohn Posts: 11,129
    edited December 1969

    wendy♥catz said:
    yes very sloppy of me
    (handy product too by looks)
    I usually remove animation from hands and feet using M4 & V4 animations but slacked off

    Note that as an Angry Old Man™ myself, I loved the animation and the rant.
    Now all of you darn kids get off my lawn!! >:-(
  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    LOL tjohn... (makes note NOT to walk on tjohns lawn)

  • JaderailJaderail Posts: 0
    edited January 2014

    My poor fingers do that, and I so understand the iStuff rant. I'm a PC person and really got no use for hand held do hickies that think they maybe sorta coulda possibly be a PC, but are not. iPad yep have one, stuff ice in it and Pad the achey parts, iTunes yep got dat too, turn on da radio and I got tunes. iPhone use one a deem also, I phone my Sis almost every night. The best part of all my iStuff is it does not cost me a extra service charge to run the buggers... Now like tjohn said, all you kids get off my lawn!

    Been looking for my Poem. I put that sucker in the one place I knew I'dd never lose it. Problem is I seem to have lost the memory of where that one place was... now when those whipper snappers invent iMemory I could sorta use that.

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  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    lol... pooor Jaderail.. mebe ya need a memory boost? But I hear ya... someday I'll find half the stuff I've been looking for also... ;) Anyway.. no rush... just post if/when you find it :)

  • TJohnTJohn Posts: 11,129
    edited December 1969

    I tried a thumb drive to increase my memory, but my thumb doesn't have a USB port. It is a 1953 model hand so... :)

  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    tjohn said:
    I tried a thumb drive to increase my memory, but my thumb doesn't have a USB port. It is a 1953 model hand so... :)

    lol tjohn... there ARE other ports.. but we won't talk about them... lol ;P

  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited February 2014

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  • Saidge42Saidge42 Posts: 136
    edited December 1969

    In Absence…..

    In absence, my mind wanders
    o’er the last day
    you were ‘side me,
    though not to stay.

    A smile curls out my lips
    from daydream thought:
    your charming face,
    the love you brought.

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  • bighbigh Posts: 8,147
    edited December 1969

    like the sad picture you made to go with the words

  • Llola LaneLlola Lane Posts: 9,364
    edited December 1969

    THANK YOU Saidge for the lovely poem and render.. they go together nicely :)
    Happy rendering!

  • Saidge42Saidge42 Posts: 136
    edited December 1969

    llolalane said:
    THANK YOU Saidge for the lovely poem and render.. they go together nicely :)
    Happy rendering!

    thanks so much for the request! I really appreciate it :D

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